Henry
i though when you wrote the story it was very common and nothing special. this might show some small aspects of cool in your mind, but this is a very rough explanations. I think this is a good story but you tried too hard to show coolness in today's society. Even though it filled your though of someone who is kind of cool, there are piece you left out that we would all love to hear.
Maggie
i though your story was a typical answer, not amazing like the girl but is full of description and life. i liked how you portrayed the class of a regular loners as a cool kid, but i stop to wonder isn't think like yourself in some ways, so are you saying that your cool too.
Charles
I though it was nice how you took a new approach to this coolness and show how you think about yourself. Since you act about the same way, people tend to include their personalities into their stories or writing. you are very honest and straight forward about your opinion of what is cool, i just wonder now, do you rethink what is you cool still cool or is it different nows?
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